Public Speaking

April 12, 2011

The topics for my class tonight are public speaking and presentations.  I’ll cover some basic principles of organizing a good speech and using presentation materials.  I’ll also have some tips on overcoming jitters.

Given that public speaking is so nerve-wracking for many people, I thought I’d use this little graphic in one of my slides as a piece of encouragement.

I’m also using the movie trailer for “The King’s Speech” as the introduction to the topic.

My message for my class this evening is this:  Anyone, even a King, can have problems speaking in public.  With help and practice, we can all improve our public speaking and presentation skills.

I have some links to some presentations tips in the Business Writing section of the Resources tab.  Check them out.  I’ll post some general tips on public speaking and links to other resources later in the week.

 

Save Me

April 4, 2011

I love when the computer or the internet eats a nearly-finished masterpiece, leaving me to bang my head against the table. “I did it again,” I think. “I forgot to save my work. Doh!”

It always happens when I’m on a roll — my fingers are flying, the words are flowing onto the screen. I’m caught up in the moment, enraptured by the brilliance of my words.

And then I fat-finger some keys and — it’s gone. And head meets table.

This problem has such a simple fix: save your brilliant words periodically. Most word processing software has an autosave function, so you can retrieve what you wrote XX minutes ago (XX = the minutes between autosaves). But there’s still the issue of losing what you entered in the “XX minus now” timeframe. But it’s better than losing everything.

If I’m using word processing software, I don’t just rely on the autosave function. I will do a physical save, as in File – Save the document periodically. Depending on how clumsy I’m feeling on the keyboard, I may save my work every paragraph or so. You can usually set up a keystroke shortcut to do the saves after your initial File – Save – document name.

The number one place I will fat finger is while I am writing email at the day job. Depending on your office email system, you may be able to retrieve some of the information from a temporary storage file. Investigate if you have a Save Draft function for your email, or if your email system autosaves to a temporary directory.

We use Lotus Notes at the day job; I have the Notes/Temp directory set up as a desktop shortcut because I’ve messed up so often. That Temp directory has saved my bacon many times. Read the fine manual or online documentation that comes with your email system to find out if there are directories or special functions that will save your text.

Despite your best efforts, there will come a time that you lose the text you have so carefully written. No retrieval method will bring back your words.

For those moments, I have this word of comfort: while the words you have lost are brilliant, the re-write/re-creation you do will be even better. I don’t know if it’s adrenalin or just that my brain has had a chance to reframe my thoughts. But every time, I find the next draft is even better.

Remember: save early and often. You’ll reduce a source of writing headaches, especially those caused by banging your head on the table because you forgot to save.

In my Business Writing class last night, I covered the basics of sentence-ending punctuation (periods, question marks, exclamation marks). When you throw quotation marks into the mix, things get complicated.

The rule I was trying to get across to my class is this: if the actual quotation or phrase uses end punctuation, the quotation marks come after the end punctuation. For example:

I want to watch “Are You Smarter Than a Fifth Grader?”

The item in quotations, Are You Smarter Than a Fifth Grader? contains a question mark. So the quotation marks come after the question mark.

When the quote or phrase in quotes doesn’t have sentence-ending punctuation within it, then the quotes come before the sentence- ending punctuation. Example:

I want to watch “Mad Men”.

I found out after class that this is not the American punctuation rule. In the United States, we should be writing that sentence as:

I want to watch “Mad Men.”

What sense does that make? The textbooks I used (published in the United States) describe the period is outside of the quotation marks in my first “Mad Men” example.

So, why the discrepancy? Thanks to Google, I found this interesting explanation written by Mark Israel on alt-usage-english.org:

According to William F. Phillips (wfp@world.std.com), in the days when printing used raised bits of metal, “.” and “,” were the most delicate, and were in danger of damage (the face of the piece of
type might break off from the body, or be bent or dented from above)
if they had a ‘”‘ on one side and a blank space on the other. Hence
the convention arose of always using ‘.”‘ and ‘,”‘ rather than ‘”.’ and ‘”,’, regardless of logic.

Fowler was a strong advocate of logical placement of punctuation
marks, i.e. only placing them inside the quotation marks if they
were part of the quoted matter. This scheme has gained ground,
and is especially popular among computer users, and others who
wish to make clear exactly what is and what is not being quoted.
Logical placement is accepted by many more publishers outside than
inside the U.S.

Some people insist that ‘.”‘ and ‘,”‘ LOOK better, but Fowler
calls them “really mere conservatives, masquerading only as
aesthetes”.

I agree with Fowler: punctuation rules should be logical. There are many things that were done different in the days of manual typesetting and manual typewriters that were done so keys or type wouldn’t break (QWERTY keyboard, anyone?).

Now that we don’t have to deal with these mechanical limitations, I say it’s time to be logical about punctuation. If there is punctuation in the quote, it goes inside the quotation marks. Otherwise, it belongs outside. The fact that my textbook resources also state it that way tells me that the old rule is in flux and right now is considered a matter of style.

Like the dash between “e” and “mail”, this old American punctuation rule will probably be replaced in a short matter of years.

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